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  1. christophertan
    28 March 2017 @ 7:14 am

    Suggested additional 2nd stanza:

    Show me the cross of Calvary
    On which Thy blood was shed
    Thy precious blood did save my soul
    My debt of sin was paid

    What do you think?

    • rcottrill
      28 March 2017 @ 8:55 am

      I like it. It adds an important point–the why of Calvary. But… As a former college English teacher, let me get fussy for a moment. The rhyming scheme Jennie Hussey chose is: a-b-a-b. In other words, the first line should rhyme with the third, and the second line should rhyme with the fourth (e.g. stanza 2: laid, arrayed; wept, slept). Here’s what I mean–though if I took some time I think I could do better with the last line :-). I was thinking of Ephesians 2:1, 5.

      Show me the cross of Calvary,
      On which Thy blood was shed;
      You paid the price of sin for me,
      Raising me from the dead.

  2. christophertan
    1 April 2017 @ 7:59 pm

    Thought about it over the last few days:

    Show me the cross of Calvary
    On which Thy blood was shed
    Thy precious blood avails for me
    My debt of sin was paid

    Maybe one day this might make it to a hymn book, God willing.

  3. christophertan
    1 April 2017 @ 8:02 pm

    I like your suggested version too.

  4. christophertan
    1 April 2017 @ 8:53 pm

    One more version based on yours

    Show me the cross of Calvary
    On which Thy blood was shed
    Thy precious blood avails for me
    Quickened me from the dead

    • rcottrill
      1 April 2017 @ 9:46 pm

      Well done indeed! I may just use “our verse” 🙂 at our Good Friday service.