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  1. Dorothy
    18 August 2009 @ 9:07 am

    For me it was in the garden
    He prayed: “Not My will, but Thine.”
    He had no tears for His own griefs,
    But sweat drops of blood for mine.

    He took my sins and my sorrows,
    He made them His very own;
    He bore the burden to Calvary,
    And suffered and died alone.

    I love those words! It is the personalization of the gospel…for me, He did that!! I completely agree. How could a congregation of believers hurry through and not relish the meaning of those beautiful words!?

    • rcottrill
      18 August 2009 @ 11:02 am

      As to how could a congregation rush through such words? Easy. #1. By not thinking about what they’re singing. And #2. By enjoying the music as a kind of end in itself, rather than seeing it as merely a setting for the message of the words.

  2. Leah
    18 August 2009 @ 11:05 am

    Thank you for visiting me over at The Point. I enjoyed your post on the Mr. Gabriel. It is so interesting to know the background behind some of our fav hymns. God bless you as you minister in this totally unique way.

    Leah

    • rcottrill
      18 August 2009 @ 11:09 am

      Thanks for the encouragement. And you make a comment I’ve heard many times over the years–that understanding a bit about the hymn writers, or why they wrote a particular song, enables us to sing with more understanding and spiritual blessing.

  3. Karen
    18 August 2009 @ 1:09 pm

    Thank you for visiting me and leaving me a comment. I love hymns, and have enjoyed visiting your blog very much. Karen

    • rcottrill
      18 August 2009 @ 1:46 pm

      You’re welcome. Lord willing, I will do an entire year of these almanac entries. Then, I have ideas for developing the hymn blog in other ways. Doing my best to keep interest in these great treasures alive. God bless.

  4. Christopher Tan
    18 August 2010 @ 10:19 pm

    I’ve come up with a fifth verse for THE BIBLE STANDS based on Ps 12:6-7. What do you think?

    The Bible stands every word as silver
    In a furnace purified;
    Thou shall keep them Lord and preserve them for-ever
    From the evil on every side.

    http://www.hymnpod.com/2010/08/19/the-bible-stands/

  5. Christopher Tan
    19 August 2010 @ 12:38 am

    Here’s another possible verse:

    The Bible stands every jot and tittle
    from the law shall be fulfilled
    Till heav’n and earth shall pass away
    Jesus’ words are firmly sealed

    • rcottrill
      19 August 2010 @ 7:39 am

      Well… Not quite up to Mr. Lillenas. But interesting. The stanza’s of the original are in a very irregular metre (10.7.10.8). The composer makes it work, with the tune, but it certainly is an odd combination. You have some lines that need either to be shorter or longer, in both your stanzas. Some suggestions:

      The Bible stands, every jot and tittle [10. And I’d add a comma.]
      From the law shall be fulfilled; [7. “Of” works more smoothly than “from” in my view.]
      Till heav’n and earth shall pass away [8. Two beats short.]
      Jesus’ words are firmly sealed [7. One beat short.]

      The Bible stands, every word as silver [10]
      In a furnace purified; [7]
      Thou shalt keep them, Lord, and preserve them forever [12. Two beats too many. And see *.]
      From the evil on every side. [8]

      *I think maybe “shalt” or “wilt” is needed on this line, rather than “shall,” And there should be commas before and after “Lord.” “Forever” does not need a hyphen. It’s a bit awkward, but you might shorten the line to: “Thou’lt keep them, Lord, and preserve them ever.”

  6. Christopher Tan
    19 August 2010 @ 7:42 pm

    Thanks. Your comments certainly help a great deal.

    I think the following should work:

    The Bible stands, ever word as silver,
    In a furnace purified.
    Thou’lt keep them, Lord, and preserve them ever,
    From the evil on every side.

    The Bible stands, ever jot and tittle,
    of the law shall be fulfilled.
    Till the heav’n and earth shall all pass away,
    Jesus’ words will be firmly sealed.

    Will these words ever make it to a hymnal?
    Probably not, but Jesus’ words will remain forever. Amen!

    • rcottrill
      19 August 2010 @ 9:41 pm

      H-m-m… Well I’m assuming the “ever” in line one of both stanzas is simply a typo for “every.” Otherwise, the first stanza looks fine. In the second, likely “of” is a typo for “Of.” But the third line still has problems. It’s not just a matter of getting the right number of beats, but of getting the em-PHA-sis on the right syl-LA-ble. Lillenas has the emphasis on the 2nd and 7th syllables in that line (i.e. the first beat of the bar in each case). In your third line of the second stanza, that would lead to this oddity: Till THE heav’n and earth shall ALL pass away. It’s coming, though. 🙂

  7. Christopher Tan
    19 August 2010 @ 9:47 pm

    Thanks again. Forgive my imperfections. Yes, there are typos. “ever” should be “every”

    This should do it:

    The Bible stands, every word as silver,
    In a furnace purified.
    Thou’lt keep them, Lord, and preserve them ever,
    From the evil on every side.

    The Bible stands, every jot and tittle,
    Of the law shall be fulfilled.
    Till hea-ven and earth shall all pass away,
    Jesus’ words will be firmly sealed.